假如你是一名高三的学生李华，在家的你突然收到学校的紧急通知，内容是今天下午立即返现并正常上课，并取消清明节假期。理由是前几天封城学生都回家就当是提前放过假了，但这几天都在上网课并才休息了一天。对此，学生之间议论纷纷，作为学校成员之一的你，也请发表你的看法。
要求：
1.紧扣主题，用词准确；
2.不少于100字。
要求：
1.紧扣主题，用词准确；
2.不少于100字。
#155471
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#155497
>>Po.155471
虽满足了主题和字数，但用句过于重复且没有进行分段处理，满分25分，实际分数5分
虽满足了主题和字数，但用句过于重复且没有进行分段处理，满分25分，实际分数5分
#155593
你好，我是高xxx的李华，我向学校申请自愿留校学习，我是为了考上xxx大学，实现我的理想才来到xx高中，如果我呆在家里，肯定会收到手机电脑的诱惑，不能好好学习，所以我希望学校能同意我的申请。在校期间我会遵守学校的各项规章制度，绝不做出伤害学校的事情。
好了，模板我就放在这里，肥肥们记得背?
好了，模板我就放在这里，肥肥们记得背?
#155627
>>Po.155497
这个运用了反复的修辞手法，着重强调了李华的绝望，同时句式整齐，富有节奏美，大量运用短句，表现了李华强烈的情感，开门见山开篇就直奔主题。这是佳作啊，我给满分！
这个运用了反复的修辞手法，着重强调了李华的绝望，同时句式整齐，富有节奏美，大量运用短句，表现了李华强烈的情感，开门见山开篇就直奔主题。这是佳作啊，我给满分！
#155637
>>Po.155627
出卷老师，您怎么也上B岛[ ☉д⊙]
出卷老师，您怎么也上B岛[ ☉д⊙]
#155831
>>Po.155627
两位阅卷老师评分差值过大，触发仲裁，请第三位老师进行评分(｀・ω・´)并入三位老师的平均分
两位阅卷老师评分差值过大，触发仲裁，请第三位老师进行评分(｀・ω・´)并入三位老师的平均分
#155836
>>Po.155831
是取平均分[*´д`]打错字了
是取平均分[*´д`]打错字了
#156070
Dear fellow students,
I'm glad to deliever a speech to all you guys,and am complimented that you should give me a degree.
As we all can see,our school has announced that students should return to shcool this afternoon, cancelling the holidays we should have and gruffly said that students have rest enough in home returning several days ago due to the pandemic.This kind of behavior is absolutely trampling us students' rights and challenging our principles.As teenagers of glory and courage,we should never let such things happen and spare no effort to boycott this so-called order.
Let's take action now to show our determination against the tyrant's deeds of the school!
I'm glad to deliever a speech to all you guys,and am complimented that you should give me a degree.
As we all can see,our school has announced that students should return to shcool this afternoon, cancelling the holidays we should have and gruffly said that students have rest enough in home returning several days ago due to the pandemic.This kind of behavior is absolutely trampling us students' rights and challenging our principles.As teenagers of glory and courage,we should never let such things happen and spare no effort to boycott this so-called order.
Let's take action now to show our determination against the tyrant's deeds of the school!
#156072
有几个词是翻译的，不知道准不准[ ´_ゝ`]
#156104
>>Po.155831
我建议去掉一个最高分，去掉一个最低分。[｀･ω･]
我建议去掉一个最高分，去掉一个最低分。[｀･ω･]
#160509
Dear fucking headmaster,
Your silly brain is full of shit?
your dear father
[ `д´]
Your silly brain is full of shit?
your dear father
[ `д´]
#160524
>>Po.160509
感情真挚，用词精确，满分[ `д´]
感情真挚，用词精确，满分[ `д´]
#160853
>>Po.156070
小肥啊，老师跟你说了多少遍了，作文里不能有guys这种口语[σﾟдﾟ]σ
小肥啊，老师跟你说了多少遍了，作文里不能有guys这种口语[σﾟдﾟ]σ
#161352
Dear headmaster,
You just repent.
I do not know what you are thinking about. But I am quite sure that there must be something wrong with your brain and it is for sure.
We students have the right to relax and not to go to school on holidays. And it is illegal to force us to go to school. If you do so, I will call the police and you must pay for what you have done.
Also, it is silly of you to let students return school. You see, so many students and so many possibility for everyone to catch covid-19. You must be very sad If the school is told to be closed.
In my point of view. What you should do is nothing but allow us to enioy the rest of the holidays.
Best wishes.
yours,
LiHua
You just repent.
I do not know what you are thinking about. But I am quite sure that there must be something wrong with your brain and it is for sure.
We students have the right to relax and not to go to school on holidays. And it is illegal to force us to go to school. If you do so, I will call the police and you must pay for what you have done.
Also, it is silly of you to let students return school. You see, so many students and so many possibility for everyone to catch covid-19. You must be very sad If the school is told to be closed.
In my point of view. What you should do is nothing but allow us to enioy the rest of the holidays.
Best wishes.
yours,
LiHua
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